The lift

He’d never tried it. But circumstances were such that he really had no alternative. He was stuck at a party that was ending, and he didn’t have a cab. He didn’t know the hosts well enough. Hers was the last car to leave. He would attempt a pick up line, just so he’d get dropped.

until next time, careening character

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12 responses to “The lift”

  1. ..and on the blog today, a 55 “The lift” https://manuscrypts.com/?p=1538

  2. Kunal Avatar

    e would attempt a pick up line, just so he’d get dropped.
    nice wordplay 😀

  3. kavi Avatar

    That was neat !! Quite neat indeed !

  4. suma Avatar

    nice, very nice…the play on the words, i mean 🙂

  5. arunima Avatar

    did it work? i mean the lines?

  6. manuscrypts Avatar

    austere: distance? 🙂

    kunal: thats the whole idea 🙂

  7. manuscrypts Avatar

    thanks rads

    thanks indeed kavi 😀

  8. manuscrypts Avatar

    suma: 🙂

    arunima: haha, don’t know…why don’t you carry the story forward?

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